Hahaha, I found a couple of MLP references alright. :D They were cute, especially the on with winter wrap-up in chapter two. The song started to play in my head like BOOM.
I've liked what you've written. It's been really enjoyable and Aoi and Kai make a beautiful pair. Well done! And you've done a good job with the urban fantasy genre. It's not my favourite, because I like my fantasy to be epic and somewhat medieval. :''D Personal preference, not anything your writing has caused. I'm glad you explored the genre tho. I'm a little disappointed you didn't explore more and developed the plot more. I feel this could've become an epic saga if made bigger. Entertain the idea for a moment, will you? :) How Kai would've almost gotten caught, random disappearings, more pressure from the fairy world? Drama between the band etc. By this I'm not saying your fic is bad. It isn't! It's awesome. :) I'm merely musing over how it would've looked like if it had an broader time span and stuff.
And as a side-note, the sex was nice. Sunbeams made me giggle, it was funny. :''D But otherwise, sweeeettt~
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Date: 2013-03-11 09:29 am (UTC)I've liked what you've written. It's been really enjoyable and Aoi and Kai make a beautiful pair. Well done! And you've done a good job with the urban fantasy genre. It's not my favourite, because I like my fantasy to be epic and somewhat medieval. :''D Personal preference, not anything your writing has caused. I'm glad you explored the genre tho. I'm a little disappointed you didn't explore more and developed the plot more. I feel this could've become an epic saga if made bigger. Entertain the idea for a moment, will you? :) How Kai would've almost gotten caught, random disappearings, more pressure from the fairy world? Drama between the band etc. By this I'm not saying your fic is bad. It isn't! It's awesome. :) I'm merely musing over how it would've looked like if it had an broader time span and stuff.
And as a side-note, the sex was nice. Sunbeams made me giggle, it was funny. :''D But otherwise, sweeeettt~
Awesome fic, awesome plot. Yay!