Congratulations on hitting 50 chapters! That's really impressive.
I'd been hoping for an update sometime this weekend and I got lucky! I remember hearing about "Pirates" from my friends and thinking what a wasted opportunity it was not to call it "Boners in the Caribbean" haha. I like how you took the basic plotline and put your own spin on it--and I'm sure the acting is FAR better with the boys than it was in the actual movie!
Such creative and porny names and I liked how we got to see the treatment too. Subaru's definitely right about his character- he'd need a lot of stamina and he'd be quite sore. Though reading that line did have my incubus Yuuki muse smirking.
That sex scene *fans self* So well done and the visuals were gorgeous. I wonder if Koichi will be switching between top and bottom too or if his on camera time as a top wore him out.
I'm very curious to see who Uruha and MiA plan on setting Koichi up with! And the details of MiA's Star Wars merch sharing space with Koichi's various monsters and plushies were very cute. Though with their combined collections they'll have to upgrade to a larger apartment soon otherwise they're going to run out of room.
Just like Datenshi Blue 1 and 2 this would be fascinating to read as its own fic but with The Camera Eye still going I completely understand if you don't plan on writing it.
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Date: 2016-04-17 07:34 pm (UTC)I'd been hoping for an update sometime this weekend and I got lucky! I remember hearing about "Pirates" from my friends and thinking what a wasted opportunity it was not to call it "Boners in the Caribbean" haha. I like how you took the basic plotline and put your own spin on it--and I'm sure the acting is FAR better with the boys than it was in the actual movie!
Such creative and porny names and I liked how we got to see the treatment too. Subaru's definitely right about his character- he'd need a lot of stamina and he'd be quite sore. Though reading that line did have my incubus Yuuki muse smirking.
That sex scene *fans self* So well done and the visuals were gorgeous. I wonder if Koichi will be switching between top and bottom too or if his on camera time as a top wore him out.
I'm very curious to see who Uruha and MiA plan on setting Koichi up with! And the details of MiA's Star Wars merch sharing space with Koichi's various monsters and plushies were very cute. Though with their combined collections they'll have to upgrade to a larger apartment soon otherwise they're going to run out of room.
Just like Datenshi Blue 1 and 2 this would be fascinating to read as its own fic but with The Camera Eye still going I completely understand if you don't plan on writing it.