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Dear Mary Sue author on Tumblr whose stuff I read out of pure trainwreck syndrome/curiosity: Please, please, please do some research on BDSM. Please. Because the one thing you do NOT want to do with a riding crop is use it directly on your partner's genitals. Furthermore, that is most likely NOT going to result in multiple screaming orgasms. There's going to be screaming, all right, but not in ecstasy.

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Oh dear lord! Let's hope whomever she (or he) is dating never asks for anything kinky because that's a disaster waiting to happen.

Edit: I'm nosy, so I went looking through Tumblr, and think I found who you mean. *shakes head*

Edited 2015-05-12 03:27 (UTC)

Yep, it's someone who's been writing several of them that keep popping up on various band tags on Tumblr. She's written several about various GazettE members and a few about Diaura - she also did a couple of Kai kink fics (one of which had him striking out at the Sue in genuine anger during kinky sex - another no-no).

What you had mentioned sounds like it's from a bloody torture scene, not a BDSM one. ^^;;;

That's pretty damn accurate. I have a feeling the writer just has no idea at all how hard a riding crop can hit. O_O

Yes, they seem to have no idea. That shows us how lack of experience and research can be harmful to your writing.

*winces forever* Yeah, they'll be screaming all right! -_-;

And probably not able to walk or sit down correctly for a week or more. Ow.

Well, maybe if you just kind of flick the crop? Not so much a hit, but the promise of one? A tap. Like, "I'll hit you here, if you don't behave" with no intention of doing it.

I could write this, but I don't see the point.

Oh, no, this wasn't a tap - he flat-out hit her between the legs. The best part was this was all supposed to be 1) fantasy fulfillment for her birthday and 2) something to make her feel better because she had a bad day at work. Well, the excruciating pain will definitely distract her from her work problems . . .

fucking ow!

Yep, precisely. If that's the author's definition of kinky fun, I'd hate to see her write a torture scene.

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