http://puss-nd-boots.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] puss-nd-boots.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] puss_nd_boots 2016-01-17 04:43 pm (UTC)

Um, yeah, that's been fixed, thanks for pointing it out! Given that I was about one day removed from my fall the day I wrote that part, it's no surprise that "accident" was foremost in my mind.

Kouki is probably the one thing Subaru most needed in this world - someone to offer him advice from an objective perspective. Face it, the opinions of the other guys in his life - Yuuki, Yo-ka and MiA - would be colored by the fact that they all have pretty strong feelings for him. (Yuuki would be likely to tell him, "Go ahead, but if he hurts you, I'll kill him," which would make Subaru hesitant).

The cameras are something I tend to forget about sometimes when writing filming scenes! I made sure they were included this time to provide a distinction between "filming" and "not filming" sex. (Also details about how frottage is normally not permissible in porn, or at least cut out of the final scene, but Uruha let it slide because the boys looked so damn hot doing it).

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